問： 考官一日改幾十篇作文，怎樣才能留下深刻印象？
答： 靠句式多樣化和豐富詞彙。

【進階連接詞】 ：in addition / furthermore / besides / moreover / as a result / therefore / due to this

【情感表達】 ：delighted / thrilled / joyful（開心）；devastated / downcast / gloomy（傷心）；furious / irritated / hostile（憤怒）

【修辭技巧】 ：適當運用修辭手法可提升文章層次。

Simile（明喻） ：Her voice sounded like a gentle breeze on a summer day.

Metaphor（暗喻） ：Every problem was a locked door waiting for the right key.

Personification（擬人化） ：The moonlight danced quietly across the library floor.

Rhetorical question（反問句） ：What could be more important than family?

Rule of three（三連句式） ：Love, care and compassion are what truly matter.

⚠️ 注意：修辭手法不宜通篇使用，一篇短文用 1-2 個即可，用在開首或主旨句最為妥當。

【常見句式結構推薦】 ：

加強語氣：Above all… / Without a doubt… / It is undeniable that…

舉例說明：For instance… / A good example is… / This can be seen when…

表達因果：Due to the fact that… / This led to… / As a consequence…